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If you’re asking for original jutsu? 1) some kind of hard light ninjutsu technique that creates illusion like objects/terrain ei: trees, bushes, houses, roads, swords etc. except for the lack of any smell or taste and the fact they are made of chakra (sensors and dojutsu hard counter it) they are indistinguishable from the real thing, plus they’re as fragile as tempered glass so no infinite weapon glitches. The upper limits and shortcomings are ultimately up to you but I think these are pretty good. 2) Some kind of Yin and/or Yang + Fire style explosive jutsu, like the phoenix flower jutsu but with a bangIf you’re asking for original jutsu? 1) some kind of hard light ninjutsu technique that creates illusion like objects/terrain ei: trees, bushes, houses, roads, swords etc. except for the lack of any smell or taste and the fact they are made of chakra (sensors and dojutsu hard counter it) they are indistinguishable from the real thing, plus they’re as fragile as tempered glass so no infinite weapon glitches. The upper limits and shortcomings are ultimately up to you but I think these are pretty good. 2) Some kind of Yin and/or Yang + Fire style explosive jutsu kind of like the phoenix flower Jutsu but with a bang If your asking for more cannon stuff: hiding like a mole and water prison are all time greatest low level jutsu that I still stand by
The team dynamics are cool for sure
I think a hidden blade like from ac3 would work very well
Why is this chapter so short???
Uncle Iroh’s belly is a prison, and its only prisoner… is tea
Can we get much higher ?
And so it begins…
This sentence is repeated
He didn’t confirm it
Spider-Man
This whole fiction has been written by GPT and it’s so obvious. If not for the fact that it seems like the author is a motive English speaker I would’ve dropped this sooner. Aside from that there where no original ideas or interesting character developments if that wasn’t enough to drop it then the basic bl+c# system to get op quick ruins any chance. 1/5
Uuuuuugh ok I was hoping there wouldn’t be a dungeon but let’s see where this goes… *sigh*