SaireiNoHEBI

Oh, this is one of those fanfics with a garbage system that makes the main character fall in love with someone and gives her heroic powers just because she can. You can stop reading right now, nothing good or interesting will come of it.

does the author really not know the reason why the hero deleted the system in the original? Seriously?

Judging by the description of the hero in the chapter, he is an asshole, which is why at the start we get 0 sympathy, 100 contempt, and then I don't really want to read anymore.

If the author is one of those people who believes that the harem makes everything better, then he is deeply mistaken. When all the female characters become cardboard boxes with no personality, it's extremely disappointing. You need to be able to write a harem beautifully, if you don't know how, don't take it. And yes, the main character is a typical nameless teenager who is not interesting to anyone, but they made him the head of the chat group anyway, and that was the end of it.

The number of women per square meter of space is already annoying. And the hero is annoying with his inconsistency. And the author is annoying with eternal descriptions of how everyone wants a hero, in this terrible world there are normal people, or rather, women, who don't think with their clitoris?

It's a very boring development, it's like I'm reading the everyday genre, but it's not interesting.The hero might as well have just been born an ordinary Uchiha.

This is a really good story, the hero's power doesn't seem to be anything interesting, but damn it, how does he get this power. Jumping into the personalities of long-dead Shinobi, he makes the strong people of the Shinobi world nervous and it's very funny. His chemistry with Tobirama, who persuades him to be less radical with the Uchiha clan, amuses me.

I really like the personalities of all the characters, they are very well written and seem alive. Pokemon are not just tools and an indicator of the “coolness” of a trainer.

the chapters in the book are out of order, it's terribly annoying.

To be honest, I first read a long-running fanfic on another site, but it died overnight. And I decided to read something else. Unexpectedly, this story really pulled me in, very cool, continue.