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  • Erazer
    Erazer2d
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    Fierce is wrong

    Meanwhile Peter and Electro were fighting continuously, punches, kicks, electric blasts and webs, the two were locked on a firce battle, but Electro elementarization made the task difficult for Peter, who was finishing his gadgets that were effective against Electro.
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    Erazer2d
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    Threw is wrong

    The spider monkey swung from building to building, his speed becoming higher and he trew himself high in the air: "North-East at one o'clock." Vily said and Spider immediately headed that way.
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  • Erazer
    Erazer2d
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    Threw is wrong

    *Swiss..* The Backpack expanded and moved covering Peter ribs and arms, thus allowing Peter to float a little, his speed increased and before he separated with Monkey he trew a small device at the Spidermonkey.
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  • Erazer
    Erazer2d
    Commented

    Mouth is wrong

    Monkey nodded and opened his mounth but Vily was faster: "I've already found the perfect place."
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  • Erazer
    Erazer2d
    Commented

    Threw and exploded are wrong

    Electro charged a massive electric ball and trew it towards monkey who swung away dodging it but the ball destroyed the ground and exsploded becoming bigger and raising the heat at high levels.
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  • Erazer
    Erazer5d
    Replied to Erazer

    Of course it’s a suggestion and it’s your choice if you want to do it or not

    Ch 16 Chapter 16: Robbery
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  • Erazer
    Erazer5d
    Commented

    Ay author how about you make the chapters that you post throughout the week in 1 bunch at the end of the week so even if you don’t post for some days or weeks we can still enjoy your novel

    Ch 16 Chapter 16: Robbery
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  • Erazer
    Erazer12d
    Commented

    I think i already sent 8-10 power stones to this novel(the only novel i wanted to give power stones to) so keep up the good work!

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Progress
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  • Erazer
    Erazer23d
    Commented

    Did you meant threw when you said “trew”?

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  • Erazer
    Erazer1mth
    Commented

    Good Luck

    Ch 5 Notice
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  • Erazer
    Erazer1mth
    Replied to Kqro

    In the current 2 chapters, you did do it.

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  • Erazer
    Erazer1mth
    Commented

    Serious is wrong.

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  • Erazer
    Erazer1mth
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    Thought is written wrong.

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