Might just write a review to myself, because why not? Look, the story is fast paced at start but bear with it for 4 to 5 chapters because it is perfectly paced after that. Thank you. [img=faceslap]

Haha! What an interesting guy you are!

Lucifer?

Maybe your AutoCorrect's 'thought' has shifted to 'though. Fix that.

Great!

The characters aren't half bad but there is no world building whatsoever. I can turn a blind eye to the grammatical errors due to the story. Good work!