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Sigh 2 fake chapters :v

Wrong fanfic

Umm the first 13 chapters i didnt find much discomfort reading, but this last 2... Im not sure if its my imagination or what but it does feel a bit more... AI? Idk if all chapters rely on AI or if only the last 2 have used it, or if there hadnt been any AI at all, but if there was AI in the first 13 chps, then at least i didnt found it that obvious, and only ch 14 and 15 started to feel iffy.

Its a very interesting story. At first the writing quality wasnt that great and even a bit awful, but as the story progress the writing quality has improved to a good degree. Arifureta is a novel i used to like quite a bit, specially the after story, and this MC really has a good compatibility with the story and its characters, especially with Nagumo as that best friend that you just want to beat up at times (very often lol). Its to the point i have even pictured them bantering in the after story as if tje MC was cannon lol. 🔥SPOILER ALERT: 🔥 It also seems to add some plot twists, not to mention Tohru, Remias situation screams time travel or something similar, now the question is... Is Myu MCs biological daughter, or is she birthed through something similar to parthenogenesis with MCs help? Im quire curious of how will that plot unfold.

Please do! And thanks for the chapters!

Although... The story itself... Isn't bad... It gets... Really... Reaaally... Reaaallyyyy... Annoying... This way of... Writing. After all... Wouldn't be better? To say what you want to say... In a single solid sentence... Than split it apart... In several pieces? Same when people talk... They dont say the whole thing in one go... Thet just... Talk... Like... This... Seriously, this story is interesting and would like to keep reading it, but that kind of writing is just to annoying. I've read several fanfics with this same problem that i ended up dropping just because of this writing style. I dont know if it's an original or a tl, but if the original is like this too then wow i dont know how people can like this style.

I thought it would've been either Sabrina or Diantha next, Diantha cause the foreshadowing from the dance plus her denying that there would be something between the two of them (you know typical face slapping when they actually do). But this is interesting, wonder who will be next and what Miori's ideal is.

Epic Naer hahaha 🤣

There's a fairy type immunity to dragon but the steel type lucario can get poisoned without the ability corrosion?

2nd time a chapter was cut and skiped lol, hope it doesnt keep going like this or what would be the point in reading :v