Nathan_Fiallion

Don’t make the MC op just to nerf him and marve arc was too small and no character development

Too focused on the multiverse. The story didn’t have much development in the main world

The concept is good but the translation was so bad I had to give up after 1 chapter I got a headache. It is not unreadable but very frustrating to read.

I don’t mind the racism but will everyone ever know the MC’s true strength?

The overall concept is good but the way you wrote the dialogues is exaggerated and annoying that is my main complaint with this book.

Buddy you need to check your auto post program there might be a problem there.

Repeated 6 of the older chapters mate

Thank you

Can anyone tell me who is this hand?

Excellent translation are you planing on continuing to translate this fanfic?