What a great and logical premise for the Overlord series. I am very interested in reading more since their take on Albedo's 'secret' is well written.

Great chapters. True to the spirit and a good alternative timeline. Very well done.

Exactly!

Such a great alternative story to a complex story. Overlord is rife with great characters and stories that are complementary and even competing. The author has been able to capture this complex story and written their own version that honors and only adds to the depth of the original work. As a fan of Overlord, I look forward to reading each chapter and can't wait to see where the story goes. Please, continue and well done.

Please continue! A great alternate story. I look forward to it!

Please continue! Only getting better.

The premise is great! What a good alternative and plausible event. Well done! I look forward to your writing and hope you take your time if it means more story from you. Thank you.