Horu

The purpose of a "quotation mark" is to signify the borrowing of someone else's words, or either just used in a third person point of view when applied in any book's style. besides, it was a comment that was still applicable and considered a suggestion.

The yapping doesn't bother me, it only builds suspense for when the action really begins. Although I may have to let the book marinate for a bit, I'll still log in and contribute to the cause each day tho.

Although we hunger, do please make sure not to sacrifice quantity for quality. 😅

Teio:

Still a good ability for the mc's prowess, also makes it not too op. Like a low-level precognition or danger sense.

A change of cover would be nice 👌

Ayo, what could possibly be used for this suspicious pause?? It's just coconut milk..

Ayo?

Ay, at least the system do be looking impeccable tho.