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Less then ultron who was born a few days ago?
I think having more power for these villains is slightly more important
Never apologize for writing more just try not to burn yourself out. I know that the upload schedule is more of a burst, but now that your into canon surely there is a more consistent upload.
Please do some permenant damage to shigi if possible, the hands at least will put him out of fights until they are regrown/healed
All the dialogue just feels forced for conflict. Also the constant metaphors with; It's not (x) its (y). Or, some common Ai ones is; Its not a fight its a execution or some shit like that but some of its pretty similar.
Forced plot and out of character
I have nothing against mark going to school/university but in every fic authors forget that he's going to live for thousands of years and will be one of; if not the most knowledgeable person just by existing and retaining information. I feel like he should spend every waking moment getting stronger for the Viltrumites. But why even make him go to it if he's using AI, interested to see where this is going.
Holy shit