Gully_Manuel

To be honest every chapter feels like a word filler chapter. To many chapters of stat talk. Hardly any plot. Only read up to chapter 9 so far so hopefully the author keeps writing and improving.

To be honest this story is so confusing. I find that the chapters are filled with more stats then plot. The author only changes two things from the movie from what I read so far. 1. Bella doesn’t fall for Edward 2. Bella gets with Jacob I mean I totally get that he wants to rewrite Bella’s story and I’m happy for that but I’m so confused of what else could the Oc add to the story other then watching and guiding Bella’s choices. Then he gets in trouble for changing stuff in the story but I’m still confused on why and how. But the real reason I can’t get into this story is the lack of interaction with OC and Alice & Rosalie which ik he doesn’t want the soulmate-ship but why input that in the story at all if you aren’t going to write them together or have him deal with them. Because that mainly why some ppl read these ff. Long story short this is definitely a book that will not be going into my library. But I do wish the author good luck and hope they continue on their write journey.

Why is this chapter needed?

Whose the love interest or interests.

Thanks for the chapter but can we at least know what joise wrote if your not going to give us Hope+John+Joise

This is what I have been asking for and the author has served it on a golden platter. Thank you sir. Thank you very much.

Thank god for that

10/10 chapter. Just what I needed thanks

Maybe so but as the title states “ 2 Broke Girls” soooo they should be more present in the story then they are now.

Nahh