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sound so so gay💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀

bro🤣

make it harem

I am drop this shit

take your time bro,don't lets reader opinions about pokemon choice influenced you much.

it golden brown another chapter

so dumb but ig make me laugh

correct this

and I know what destruction mean in her name lol

now that I read all of you chapter,I smell a masterpiece! First off,let's talk about world building: the world building is good as it is,he sometime add another POV and theses comment like reddit make his world feel really alive,the world is not too dark,and it all fun and sunshine sometimes. mc Posanality: Mc is quit straight farward,but considered enough not be Edgy lord, he have bain to think of plan,his moral is that of good kid yet when push came to shove he can kill,he brave,not a coward. character development are on the way, Mc are not some Omni king, Arthur make sure of that by showing his growth about TM thing. 🔸️my advice about him- Somtime you have to show his bad habit to make the depth of Character,like bad at cooking,we are have something we bad at one point no? So that why we need friends to cover that spot. whatever you try study form them or let them teach you how to play a game. in this case you can add someone who know how to cook a pokefood properly or someone who have potential and make them cook to show your side character growth too,which is also a way to power up Mc pokemons Now that we talk about his pokemons,let's continue on that,the choice your doing now seem fine,soild even,because you make sure to strick to that of not catching anything but perfer pokemon that is strong or rare,it has pro and con pro-it make each pokemons he catching feel special,you can add their Backstory to make their have more Posanality and your doing good like now as a Deino case. con Reader opinions,sometimes it good to acknowledge they request but you know different people different pokemon they love. If you choose this cool strong pokemon to add in his team because the reviews some will cheer while other are still going to boo anyway,So I perfer you cook for us instead,like Deino,I find it refreshed even. Pokemon Battle,not much to talk,he doing really great,but too much move,make it hard for you to track them all it is? focus on some or have a battle rule where you have to limit the move you can use. Female lead or whatever Romance you planing-like now I smell two of them. Cynthia and Misty, for now Mc has a Sotf spot for Cynthiafor unknown reason,he help her for the restroom sure,he invite her to breakfast,sure. she help him understand TM,good. and now it feel like a one side love form MC where he want to get her attention. Misty-for now she like a side chick,can tell that she have think for MC,but he has a thing for Cynthia and that why I smell drama. for nownI advice for you to make them a good friend now,don't rushs. now let's see what you cook for us next chapter.