Immortal_Monarch_7083

This has been one of the best reads I’ve had in a long time.[img=coins][img=coins] I think the MC should focus more on understanding and comprehending his skills instead of relying purely on point-based upgrades, since that would actually save him a lot of points. For example, if the system calculates point consumption based on the time it takes for the MC to master a skill, then improving his comprehension should significantly reduce the required points—maybe even by a multiple. Also, if the Infinite Demon Sect is considered a top-tier immortal sect (excluding higher realms like Primordial or Dao levels), how does it make sense that a mere Foundation Establishment (FE) cultivator is qualified to be an outer disciple? After all, FE still falls under the mortal cultivation realms.

Great improvement from the original, hope to see physiques, souls, bloodlines,laws, concepts,daos,reaching extreme power within each realm or going beyond set limits etc. And do something different with them (Ex. rather than using a strongest bloodlines try mixing multiple, or creating a entirely new bloodline/physique researching etc. ) Good writing, hopefully you will continue till the completion.

Now, seeing MC himself contemplating Self,I etc. seeing it requires comprehension to gain skills not just shouting their name is first towards a real cultivation game, I hope MC doesn't always act like fool, and please improve the IQ,EQ levels of side,bg characters. Mainly cowardice is the result of caution and sometimes in a place like xianxia worlds even then it is required to take risks considering probability(I think in this case Mc should be able to guess it because of his mind) and maintaining caution.Hopefully MC remains intelligent in all cases and all the best to author

That's a good writing, tried to keep every character & bg char sense full. Keep options more open for attributes Not just obvious elements (🔥, ⚡, 🌎 etc.) , like illusion,death,life,yin yang many more , didn't introduce any fighting techniques or skills etc. In future I think may be MC will learn alchemy & weapon refining.Hope there are auras ,intents, concepts, domains,laws etc. Love to see in which direction story goes( 3 ⭐ because I don't know how story goes hopefully nxt time I read I can give 5 ⭐)

Character Development and World-Building: The character development is solid, but the world-building could use a bit more organization. At times, the main character’s lines feel overly heroic or badass, when they should come across as more realistic. For instance, the order in which the character expresses their biggest fear and faces a certain intense threat could be swapped for better realism and pacing. Fight Scene Execution: One of the major fight scenes felt a bit forced, as if it was written just to ensure a particular outcome. While the skill names used in combat were quite impressive, the overall execution of the battle could have been more nuanced to avoid seeming too convenient. MC's Strategic Decisions: There are a few moments where the main character doesn’t seem to learn from past experiences. For example, despite knowing that certain actions don’t always lead to definitive outcomes, the character doesn't take the necessary precautions in subsequent encounters. Given how intelligent and resourceful the character is supposed to be, this can feel a little inconsistent. It might help if the character had a better system for preventing mistakes or ensuring more permanent resolutions. And naming sense of skills,titles etc. is very badass 🙌👌. Except those type of scenarios & some other , Overall it is very good I am enjoying 😁& waiting for more chapters

Try to make MC smarter, and don't try to make MC instant learn every technique by some command and make sure MC always doesn't rely on system(i mean for comprehension of realms or dao's or path of cultivation) and in future if there is a system panel don't write "realm" xx/yyy like that bcz that defines max already and it shows the limit but limit depends on oneself rather than by system it's just my review(expectations) take anything that helps u leave that's not. [img=update]