BlazeMaddox

Thank you for your participation and comments. I hope you can point out the deficiencies in my story.

Thanks for your comment! In the sentence, 'their' refers to the three extra locks. I used 'their' to indicate the collective security provided by all the locks together, which is why Luna's smile returns only after she ensures they are all securely fastened.

Thanks for your feedback; I've made the changes.

It is not quoted from another text; it is merely used to highlight the style of expression. Thank you for your question. I have made the modification.

Alright, I've made the changes. Thank you.

"Oh, sorry, I have made the changes."

Thanks a ton for the gift! If you have any thoughts or questions about the story, I'd love to hear them. Your support is greatly appreciated.

Thanks a ton for the gift! If you have any thoughts or questions about the story, I'd love to hear them. Your support is greatly appreciated.

Thanks a ton for the gift! If you have any thoughts or questions about the story, I'd love to hear them. Your support is greatly appreciated.

Thanks a ton for the gift! If you have any thoughts or questions about the story, I'd love to hear them. Your support is greatly appreciated.