thanks for the chapter hope to reqd more soon

thanks for the chapter

one of the best tensura I read, the pace of the story is good and the route of the story. although this one is my bias opinion can make the mc take care of the girls even though he was evil it was quite bothering if mc see the girls as tool for s*xual desire etc nice ff keep it up author

thanks for the chap

thanks for the chapter

nope overtime he will improve because of his past memories (vissions of he's past lives)

idk what chapter it is but he will be able to cultivate in real world

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter can't wait for the next

laplace was so strong maybe because he was the past elven hero ;>

thanks for the chapter can't wait for next 🤩

legal loli 🤣

thanks for the chap

i love you new fic author just like the others hope to read more chapter soon

thanks for another great chapter

thanks for the chapter hope to read more sooon

thanks for the chapter can't wait for the next

nice chapter I have read the other version of this now im certain this will be good the pacing was good the romance still lacking but much better than the other version there were many changes and I can't wait to see it all. Thanks for the chapter hope to read more.

hmm it was good but i think the plot was was rush and the romance :)

Wanda is still the best 👍