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Makoto_Seijuro

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  • Makoto_Seijuro
    Makoto_Seijuro7d ago
    Replied to Makoto_Seijuro

    Perhaps if the story gets better in the future, I'll change my rating.

  • Makoto_Seijuro
    Makoto_Seijuro7d ago
    Replied to Nuny2335

    I didn't lie anywhere - this is how I see this story, as I already said, you can hate me, I don't care

  • Makoto_Seijuro
    Makoto_Seijuro8d ago
    Posted

    I honestly don't understand such a good rating for this story. Its only advantage is a truly interesting genome and the main character's crystal element, and that's it! I read through a translator (since I don't know English very well), so I admit that I might miss interesting moments in the original, which is why I decided to read without a translator. But even so, with a limited understanding of English, I see clearly poorly written dialogue, and descriptions of objects in the text (although you can make allowances on this site), the word "parasites", and simply illogical moments in the characters and events themselves. I'm interested in how this story will develop, but it's clearly lame and objectively doesn't deserve so many good reviews. You can hate me, I don't give a shit.

  • Makoto_Seijuro
    Makoto_Seijuro25d ago
    Posted

    Hello, I really liked this story, I would like to know the original title if possible, thanks in advance 🙏. .

  • Makoto_Seijuro
    Makoto_Seijuro3 months ago
    Commented

    I love this story so much, it's a shame that the chapters aren't coming out 2-3 times a day, but that's understandable, after all, it's not a translation, but the original, the chapter turned out just great

  • Makoto_Seijuro
    Makoto_Seijuro4 months ago
    Posted

    Original or translation? It just feels like a translation.❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔❔

  • Makoto_Seijuro
    Makoto_Seijuro5 months ago
    Replied to Aarvan

    Thank you

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  • Makoto_Seijuro
    Makoto_Seijuro5 months ago
    Replied to Noah_Godt

    黑子的籃球:相信我,這全靠努力和汗水! I've already tried this, but it doesn't find anything except Chinese sites that have nothing to do with this fanfic or fanfics in general, just sites with original anime, and I need a fanfic specifically.

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  • Makoto_Seijuro
    Makoto_Seijuro5 months ago
    Posted

    This is a good story, I've seen it on this site for the second time, but last time it was deleted, so I'm asking you for the original title, because I really want to read the original.

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  • Makoto_Seijuro
    Makoto_Seijuro5 months ago
    Posted

    Can I please give you the original title or at least the original title? I just have a strange affinity for reading books in the original. P.S. English isn't my native language and I don't know it very well.