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ScarletLet9hCommentedThis chapter really makes Louisa's character so much deeper! Good job!
"Well, he got his demonstration, so now I guess those who support him would be even more inclined to talk about me as if I am not a human." – the woman said softly, staring at her feet.- ScarletLet9hCommented"How is speaking the truth an insult?" – the other wizard laughed cruelly – "I understand that normally you don't have much blood in your brain between this enchanting creature using her magic on you and our invaluable yet lustful First Guardian, but surely there's enough for you to realise that if you attack me here, it will spell the end of your House. You ought to think more about your son than your romantic interests!"
- ScarletLet9hCommented
Just a side note - really appreciate the details and especially the description of the scents.
"The Birth of Venus unfolding before me! What a rare treat!" – Adrian Borealis' low, husky voice jolted Louisa, prompting her to awaken from her trance and find the Duke uncomfortably close. She even caught a whiff of his fresh, citrusy perfume with woody undertones. - ScarletLet3dReplied to SaileaThe wizard was dressed in a linen suit the colour of moonlit sand, which hugged his slender frame with understated grace. A crisp, white Egyptian cotton shirt draped softly in the sea breeze, its collar adorned with a subtle touch of azure embroidery, echoing the hue of the aristocrat's captivating sky-blue eyes. The alpenglow made his auburn hair glimmer like molten copper. His posture emitted superiority and boredom as his gaze didn't miss a single detail from his surroundings.
- ScarletLet7dCommented
This is very cool and funny. Love the introduction of MF. Good approach!
"50 Galleons!" – mumbled Remus, shaking his head in disbelief, helplessly watching his friends as they nonchalantly planned to break the law by acquiring and sneaking an Ashwinder egg back to Hogwarts in September. - ScarletLet7dCommented"It wasn't me!" – he quickly muttered, causing the other three teenagers to burst into laughter.
- ScarletLet7dCommented"I doubt you have anything I haven't seen before." – Catherine smirked, taking a seat on Peter's empty bed.
- ScarletLet7dCommented"Um, because I seek knowledge?" – the girl gave her best shot.
- ScarletLet8dCommentedThe atmosphere in the Gryffindor Common Room that evening was thick with gloom. Dumbledore, deeply disappointed by the outbreak of violence between the two houses and considering the year's previous incidents, made the difficult decision to cancel the Quidditch tournament for the remainder of the season. The students' frustration surpassed mere annoyance. Hufflepuffs and Ravenclaws, in particular, directed their ire towards Gryffindors and Slytherins, feeling unfairly punished for actions they didn't commit.
- ScarletLet8dCommentedBefore Catherine could react, she found her wrists pinned above her head against the nearest wall in a gentle but firm manner as Lucius bent over and whispered huskily in her ear. "Even this ridiculous haircut couldn't extinguish my interest. If anything, I started wondering if I would also enjoy playing with boys. You're such an inspiration, Miss Plantier!"
- ScarletLet8dCommented"The whole school knows what kind of sick, perverted things you fancy, but unfortunately for you, whips, chains and dog collars do not interest me in any shape or form." – the girl declared firmly, her cheeks flushed, as she attempted to hold her ground.
- ScarletLet8dCommented
I'm curious what are the plans for his story line. There were so many unanswered questions in the books regarding Regulus
"Shut up, or I might change my mind!" the witch hissed, beads of sweat forming on her forehead. In what felt like hours but was, in reality, only around two minutes, the wounds vanished completely, and the pain subsided. Catherine sighed with relief and rose to her feet, swaying with exhaustion. Leaning against the nearest wall, she witnessed Dumbledore and Thorne escorting the Gryffindor team out of the Changing Room and toward the exit. - ScarletLet8dCommented"Why is it always you?" – the weary voice of Professor Thorne resonated, though he didn't spare her a glance as he and Dumbledore passed by, focusing on freeing the Gryffindors from the Changing Room.
- ScarletLet8dCommented"I would say that the Slytherin team has also been naturalised." – sneered Sirius – "Who would have thought that a bag of Doxies could cause equal harm to triple Bombardment Spell? And considering Flame is stronger than Cissy and my little brother combined, I think you would choke on your words, cousin!"
- ScarletLet13dCommented"Don't worry, Malfoy, there are plenty of us here who would gladly hex you!" – James interjected sternly, flanked by Remus and Peter as they emerged behind the Slytherins.
- ScarletLet13dCommented
Oh, this is a nice touch to integrate this line if canon
Andromeda - ScarletLet13dCommented
I really like this concept if using flowers to create illusions. Also I do enjoy how Catherine and Greg's relationship evolves. and I look forward to seeing how she'll find about Carsilion.
Recognising his limited grasp of the magic, the young wizard was aware that he could achieve little by mere guesswork. Through trial and error, he had discovered a few tricks, such as creating a calming effect using Bluebells to evoke pleasant memories. However, these simple achievements paled in comparison to the intricate mastery displayed by Florian Plantier, who could seamlessly blend different plant combinations to craft elaborate illusions. Greg recalled how his grandfather used at least twenty different flowers to disguise Catherine's presence while they traversed the streets of London. Consequently, to anyone but their family, she appeared as a young blond boy. - ScarletLet13dCommented"Hah, sounds like Carter Thorne would fit perfectly there then, if he ever gets the chance to make an impression on Borealis." – Catherine scoffed – "Have you talked with Dad about what I told you?"
- ScarletLet13dCommented
Taste like a confusion.. love this lol
"I doubt it. The food usually consists of some unpronounceable expensive dishes that just taste like confusion." – Greg replied, rising to his feet - "Carsilion's absolutely right: skip the food and go straight to the drinks! The time will pass more quickly. Too bad I'm not old enough." - ScarletLet13dCommented"I have no issues believing it whatsoever! She was absolutely enraged!" – laughed Greg, regretting that he couldn't tell Catherine that no matter how upset Louisa McMahon had been with Dumbledore, it didn't even come close to how furious she was at Marquess Carsilion Egbert. The latter made the ill-advised decision to visit for dinner during the Easter holidays. While Carsilion was certainly a remarkable duellist, he wasn't exactly prepared for the raw power of his best friend's wife, who appeared adamant to give him the same haircut as her daughter's. It took the house-elves hours to repair all the damage, and Edward, who had to intervene, was sent to sleep in another room for a week.