KayJaye

I shall consider it.

Got it. Is there anything in particular you find not satisfactory? Like the portrayal? Or the scene itself where the ancient one is involved? Give me a heads up so I can improve it later on. Thanks for the review!

It's already there buddy. I did say it wasn't a chapter and on it. Sorry ^_^

Probably from Prototype? I did take the inspiration there, after all, Alex Mercer became a villain in Prototype II

Woah. You're a beast. I'll be writing the next chapter tomorrow. I'm not free all the time especially on the weekend. Thanks for the review.

Yes, I use AI. Read at your own risk.

It is .

Defeats the title and core of the story... but you have a point...

Who would want to review themselves and give a low score, right? Quick heads up, this has been rewritten. I didn't like the part where he became the sensei of Team 7, and I also disliked the part where he didn't do anything with the Uchiha. It also took me a while to integrate the other world powers. So this time, here are things you can expect. He won't be the team captain of Team 7 He will do something about the Uchiha massacre, just a bit. The other world's power will be integrated before and during the academy days. I was now 7 years old. And finally, he might befriend one of the tailed beasts. This is original, by the way

Probably because she's tsun? or because she's powerful? In my case here, Widow is out can't get her preggy. Hill or any agent is also out. Too complicated especially Carol. Now, Wanda. Wanda has almost the same dream as Elias. A home. Don't they just click?