canadam

Why did bro censor shit and not fuck

Peak chapter

Where’s ayoub 🤔

A few wordy sentences and I still don’t know what the main characters look like or much about their personalities which is something I want to know, other than that I really like this chapter

Good story but currently (chapter 3) needs way more world building and development on the characters, lots of unexplained settings and character mannerisms

Mid chapter, Adam carried most of the scenes