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FrostyPaws4dReplied to aaron_randleasFixed as well, thank you :)
This paragraph has been deleted.- FrostyPaws4dReplied to aaron_randleas
Yes! Fixed now, thank you :)
This paragraph has been deleted. - FrostyPaws6dReplied to thomas_toher
Hehehe
But that is a story for another time. - FrostyPaws7dReplied to BKHULKCh 286 Chapter 286 - Home stretch
- FrostyPaws8dReplied to aaron_randleas
I do! Fixed now, thank you :)
This paragraph has been deleted. - FrostyPaws9dReplied to aaron_randleasCh 261 Chapter 261 - Loose ends [1/2]**
- FrostyPaws9dReplied to aaron_randleasCh 227 Chapter 227 - Revenge
- FrostyPaws16dReplied to Tnega_Terces
It was supposed to be 'a gag, too, please.' Bad punctuation and spelling. Fixed now! Thank you :)
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Perhaps you're right, I'll remove the word inside. Thank you :)
This paragraph has been deleted. - FrostyPaws16dReplied to Tnega_Terces
It was mentioned earlier that Elora was automatically translating for him :)
He relayed Elora's words to her mother, whose name he later learned was Morganae, and she led them through the forest and into a slightly darker but still eerily beautiful part of the forest. - FrostyPaws16dReplied to Tnega_Terces
You're right, but I think the original sounds better, even if not exactly grammatically correct. Rhymes don't really need to be grammatically correct anyway ;)
Soul-bound partners, forever embrace." - FrostyPaws16dReplied to Tnega_Terces
Fixed! Thank you :)
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hehehe, don't worry, there'll be enough women. But if this boy was a girl, and the kidnapper was a guy, than who knows what would have happened in that bedroom? I think it would be better if its a boy who becomes a friend. His stunning elf sister on the other hand... ;)
Naturally, this was not the war hammer he left behind on Söl, but it was a much weaker backup weapon he had stored in his armour's storage space. - FrostyPaws19dReplied to ZARIUS
Now that would be telling :) But don't worry, Edda will die. Although that's not to say there isn't more going on here. ;)
Edda still saw the oval light briefly but paid it no mind as she grabbed her aching head and groaned, "Ugh, what happened? Where am I? I feel like I've been asleep for ages…" - FrostyPaws19dReplied to ZARIUS
Hehe, don't worry, it won't. I've already decided how it's going to end, and I won't change my mind.
Everyone was aware of what was happening but couldn't figure out how or why. Edda was confused but still determined to shoot Erik. She tried her hardest to keep raising the gun but couldn't get it to move faster than inching speed. - FrostyPaws23dReplied to ShaadyJ
You're right, I actually did a rewrite on the previous chapter yesterday, and it seems I forgot to change this. Thank you for pointing it out :)
This paragraph has been deleted. - FrostyPaws27dReplied to ItBeLikeThat
At the moment there is a single scene were this happens (chapters 217 and 218) If you don't mind minor spoilers you can check it out and see how you feel about it. :) Either way though, it won't happen often.
This paragraph has been deleted. - FrostyPaws27dReplied to ItBeLikeThat
Perhaps I should have mentioned this sooner, but Elora can change her size to be 1.6m in height, much like her mother :) I think mentioned in chapter ten.
Although they had danced around it for a little while, It hadn't actually taken long after they met before Erik and Elora became each other's firsts. Ever since then, they had gone at it like rabbits. - FrostyPaws30dReplied to Joethedeath
Fixed! Thank you :)
This paragraph has been deleted. - FrostyPaws1mthReplied to Mike_Cooper
Haha I went for a shining reference, but huffing and puffing would have been good to. Unfortunately, he won't get his breath attack until a few chapters in, haha :)
Erik scoffed, "No, you won't. You're too much of a coward to get rid of your last chance for survival. Now, if you don't open the door, I'll open it for you."