The Rewrite Version is not bad, the Protagonist being transmigrated inside a test tube chamber is quite creative, I haven't seen any novel that would put the Protagonist inside a test tube chamber.. at Chapter 7 the writing quality got better if you compare it back at chapter 1, I like how it focus on one scene then focus on another scene while also explaining some stuff to the reader.. all in all its a entertaining novel I wonder what will happen next!....Author please don't drop this Novel! I really like reading it!! Please Continue writing! this is the only Loli Protagonist I seen that is still continuing! Please Don't Drop It!

This Novel is quite entertaining and Refreshing!its been a while since there was a novel about Loli!although there were some mistake in grammer but you can still understandplease don't drop the novel Author-San!

Very Goood!