Okay. Consider me intrigued.

I don't know how I'm feeling right now. This story started out cool and really awesome. I loved how the character wasn't nerfed. But right now it seems like a very bad parody with awful comic sense. I will read one more chapter before making a decision.

Objectively the most major flaw in this chapter is that Eve's turn to the Dark Side was not nearly as logical as it could be. Mephisto's role in her corruption and Eve's own desires are not clearly distinguished. It's not clear whether Eve had always had the thought to betray Justin, or if it were a recent thing. Because in the beginning she was quite respectful, fond and playful with Justin. Was it Mephisto whose influence corrupted her? It's not very clear and it's almost like a normal situation just went and devolved.

I usually read stories without in-line comments. Now seeing so many trolls, I've realised how right that decision of mine was.