GloryLife
Hello, I'm a new Light Novel writer. Please go and read my novels. Love and Peace ❤
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GloryLife6mthCommentedLuna (Full name not revealed yet)
After three days, I awoke, dressed quickly, and rushed outside to search for Eto. However, he was nowhere to be found. Shifting to Eto's perspective, we find him high above the Kingdom of Misao, pointing his palm towards the kingdom. Sensing a presence behind him, he turned to confront Luna, a green-haired girl with captivating purple eyes, stars as pupils. Seated invisibly, she wore revealing clothes, exuding an aura of sarcasm and evil intentions.- GloryLife6mthCommented
Tatsuya's scythe
Feeling somewhat disheartened, I stepped away from the weapon display. Aria noticed my disappointment as we left the guild. She disappeared for a moment, and when she returned, she was holding the scythe in her hands. She handed it to me and said, "This is a welcoming gift." - GloryLife6mthReplied to GloryLife
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The Dragon Boss (I don't know how to make it two heads. You get the Idea though)
Suddenly, a roar echoed through the cave, and I turned to see a huge red dragon with two heads. I prepared myself, gripping my scythe, and sharpened my senses. Eto, however, calmly sat down and resumed reading his book. As the dragon launched a massive fireball towards us, I gripped my scythe and swung it vertically, creating a slash that cut the fireball in half. - GloryLife6mthCommented
Cave
Deciding to hunt dragons with Eto, he readied himself and teleported us to a dragon's nest. Eto informed me, "This is a dragon's lair, so the mother should be near." Inside the cave, we discovered three massive eggs in the corner, and Eto explained, "This is a dragon's lair; that's why it's so big." - GloryLife6mthCommented
Kyron O'Gallagher
Approaching us, the elderly King Kyron O'Gallagher introduced himself. Around 50 years old, with brown hair and beard, he extended a warm welcome. The encounter marked the beginning of our diplomatic journey in Hyogan. - GloryLife6mthCommented
Ixion Mercia
Suddenly, a voice echoed, freezing us in our tracks. "You're not allowed to move until I say otherwise." The person revealed himself with bright yellow eyes, a calm expression, and a towering stature. Shirtless, donning baggy white pants and shoes, he stood at 6'3" with a well-shaped body. As he approached, he asked, "Why are you in my territory? And why is your aura so menacing?" - GloryLife6mthCommented
Eto Tratarossa
As the guards trembled, one whispered the chilling truth, "The Third Demon Lord, Eto Tratarossa." Panic ensued among the guards, attempting a futile escape that was abruptly halted. With swift precision, Eto effortlessly cleaved through them, leaving a haunting image of guards severed in half. The abrupt brutality was a testament to Eto's fearsome reputation. - GloryLife6mthReplied to Karma356
Well, I wouldn't want him to be super op, I would want him to be strong, but weak enough to need help from others? I'm not sure if you understand what I mean. Now equipping all Titles would be a good idea, but it would kinda mess up a little bit the Stats Tab. I will consider this Idea and I will see what I would do. Thanks for the Comments.
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Fixed.
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Well, he has an Inventory for Titles, he would use an old Title if he would like to. If you have a idea on how you think I would Improve this feature, feel free to leave it.
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oh I didn't noticed, it's because I write my entire novel in Samsung notes, so I could have a more free preview, then I copy and paste it on here. Thanks for telling me, I would be fixing this asap.
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Please, my guy, get help from someone or get help online to fix your grammar. For those who think I'm being mean or anything, I'm not. I'm simply helping the guy grammatically. If you can't handle seeing someone help someone, don't even bother to say, 'Why are you being so mean?' because that's mad unnecessary. Other than that, Gojo's personality and everything else is pretty decent, keep working hard. But try and fix the Grammar. Also to not get collapsing errors, after every paragraph just do this :(Next paragraph)skip a line so it could be clearer when a paragraph is finished, if you don't do that, you will get cut from one paragraph to the other. And that looks really bad, because I used to do my novels without skipping a line, and that created paragraphs that should be separated, to be together. Love and Peace brother ❤
Ch 4 CH 4 || LEAVING THE ISLAND - GloryLife6mthCommented
I think I speak on behalf of everyone here, if you really aren't good on grammar, try getting help online, or from someone who can tell you what is grammatically wrong on your sentences. Love and Peace brother ❤
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You accidentally used 'to' twice in that sentence, 'to to'.
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After a dot, the next word starts with a capital letter. 'In my other world. and' thats what you wrote, the 'and' should start with a capital letter.
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