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Yeah idk why but for some reason I thought she was a Dark Pheonix back when her side chapters were introduced but I remembered wrong
War is imminent and bro wants to relax smh
I thought she was a Phoenix? Or am I thinking of someone else hmmm
We’ve been told how they look countless times, shouldn’t be repeated over and over again unless it’s like a big event. For example a Ball, social events, special moments etc. having the girls be described even in regular moments like this gets very repetitive and I find myself having to skim chapters to skip the descriptions
Unnecessary descriptions
And a Necro isn’t? Please 💀
Ngl if I were Nala I’d be pretty disgusted since isn’t his Shadow Form ugly as hell? 💀
Inara meeting maybe? We haven’t seen her in a while same with her granddaughter
They were pastel pink, not light brown
Pretty sure her mother didn’t no? Wasn’t her mother the only who tried to prevent her banishment?
This is repeated but includes Nov banks added too compared to 1 or two paragraphs up
1 down 10+ to go
See nicknames like this are cute, Little Light. Not like what Archer calls his girls, he just be adding Dear in front of their race 💀
THATS WHAT IM SAYING! xD Yet he gets smacked around all the time even though he’s a White Dragon ! He shouldn’t be struggling so much in fights majority of the time
even “my” own?
Someone at his level shouldn’t have the power to break his jaw like that, I still don’t get how a Human even if Mutated has the same specs as a Dragon
Suddenly went first person. “me” should be “him”
What sheets aren’t they still in the desert