ConnorCrimson

you know its a chinese translation when two words translates to four

and of the words 'the' and the male pronouns are missing

I don't really like omake's unless their at the end of the story as a kind of epilogue bonus. I can understand why people would freak out in the comment section about multiple omake's in a short period of time. But whatever you do Belamy don't get discouraged by the hate people direct your way for changing and upgrading your style. As far as A.I being used to edit fanfiction's go this story is a solid 8/10 in my eyes. Much better than your other longer fic.

I loved your other story 'Grind is my Ninja Way'. This story is clearly from the same author but the quality is much better, like way better. Judging by all the new fancy story covers it appears as though you've started using some A.I. to help with the editing. It's working! Keep up the amazing work Belamy and have a positive 5 star review from me! :)

dragon bone not dragon glass

5$ - 10$ for full access and a stockpile of 30 - 50 chapters is usually a very good way to go about a patreon page. Especially if you can maintain your upload schedule of once per day. The best example of an excellent patreon page is Viva01's Hard Enough Pokémon Brock SI. He has like 100 chapters stockpiled and posts twice a week for $5 Canadian Dollars. He has 2201 paid members and makes $11,005 CAD monthly according to the public statistics. ($8000 USD) If you maintain your upload schedule and translation quality even if you don't have a stockpile of 100 chapters I would easily pay 5-10 dollars monthly for your patreon. If you also pick popular and well written fics to translate after this one you'd maintain your popularity which is good for making money and getting subscriptions. I would also start out smaller like 5$ and one daily upload and then just maintain a good schedule. Two things to avoid is doing tiered benefits and doing multiple fics but never finishing one before starting another. Just stick to one popular fic and then translated it all the way until it's complete before selecting another popular and well written fic to translate.

Thank you for the chapter! Keep up the good work! :)

Thank you for the chapter! Keep up the good work! :)

Thank you for the chapter! Keep up the good work! :)

Thank you for the chapter! Keep up the good work! :)