Btw, I like your other translation more "Part Time Employee In Konoha." It is very different than mainstream reincarnation Naruto's fanfiction. So chaotic character yet no evil.

I thought it will be a cool anti hero fanfic. In the beginning mc really bloody thirsty, killing crooks here and there but still nice to people in general. Until he extorts Kingpin, like c'mon... Just be mercenary if the mc wants money. The translation is great btw. But I don't know about the quality of Chinese's author to write a story... It is the same with their comics, in the beginning they are good, some even have amazing quality. But later they always mess up.

Not to mention this is a re-post as well. The original author is White Angel of Auralon. This fic is an acient story on fanfiction net website. Publish in 2012, latest update in 2018. Don't know this is the author himself or just someone who steals the credit.

It is.

The female characters in Naruto not that strong actually. Well, it is shonen. Man always defeat woman. both female Kages beaten by Madara, Konan by Obito. Even rare kekkai genkai users like Pakura and Guren were fallen as well. But Sakura, she is impressive. The series shows her character development. Maybe if Naruto franchise has long long episode like One Piece, we have those certain character to develop more. I am Hinata fan, I want to know how her power or style of fighting. What I got is just a wife household.

This translation fic is too chinese. I can't.

I don't understand of gender bender things, it is not like the original series having less female character either. I understand if you gender bender in Non Non Biyori because the series lack of male characters. But for that in a shounen anime?! or it is just author's fetish or something?!

either it was mistranslation or the original author didn't know what fuinjutsu is... fuinjutsu is sealing justu. not unique ninjutsu. If you want unique ninjutsu, there are family trait like Ino-Shika-Cho abilities.

So far, this story is not my liking either. But I think a hentai fanfiction with sex system will suit you better just like your name.

If you like Fubuki and Kurokami. This is their variant story. #Konkitsune 🤟

This is a good fanfic. but the slow pace is killing me. I am afraid, you will stuck in the middle someday. You will be less enthusiastic while the progress still low.

It was interesting so far. I really like the cunning Hinata style. I don't mind OP character, but please put the balance with her enemies too. I feel like, if the kid Hinata already this cunning and powerful, the original enemies like Akatsuki or Orochimaru in the series is just a child play to teen Hinata, now she is already invest her long plans with Kimimaru, Neji, Haku and Naruto. I feel like it is not fair for the enemies. lol..It is just my suggestion. I am fine with you continue doing with your own plot or follow a bit of canon plot. Just don't do it too easy (just like a mainstream OP character story). Good luck.