ServArcher

it is an enjoyable read for me. i just wonder when will MC start explaining about his ability to erina, not everything but the world traveler part and what it is really means. i think it's necessary progress for the relationship and the novel just gloss it over.

"... just myself."

too much info dumping, too detailed descriptions, and the "pov" lacked individuality. i think the mc's personality bleed to other chara's "pov" making it seems more like an omniscient third person "pov" rather than individual.

I'd like to rate the story higher but the grammar is just annoyingly tiring to read. the author just kept confusing words like there/their/they're and you're/your, and it's really irritating. The only thing nagging me about the plot is the MC's personality and mentality which was kinda like the author trying to balance between edginess and lighthearted but what you got basically a half-assed character. overall it is flawed story but interesting enough for to follow nonetheless.

dont read if u dont want a rushed ending