After 1 chapter I couldn't analyse it based on much but it is the plot that stands out to me very unique (hoping it is an original idea). The difference between the two characters and there characteristics are clearly displayed in the first chapter which is usually a good thing. Keep the chapters coming!![img=update]

Great work i think it's an embodiment of mystery and intricacy which I love keep it up!! I just recently got into light novels And I find it quiet interesting that there are so many good pieces of Art that stand out especially this one

The writer is clearly new but has an interesting plot at hand, if properly executed could blow up, keep it up