richard_bethel_8178

please update this story I loved it. i think this story has the potential to be the best john wick story on the website it is already my favorite john wick my favorite story that I have read.

this is a copy of another fanfiction.

this is my favorite Naruto fanfiction, and i have read hundreds of them. the only thing need to work on is your main character's grammar is inconsistent.

great story with some unnatural dialogue. its only significant problem is the dialogue and occasionally mirky character motivations pertaining to the main character's enemies.

I love your story, but could you summon the characters you don't assimilate faster. I also think you should move the location away from New York to Los Angeles.

when is he going to use the character cards he has? i feel like it has been far too long holding on to them doing nothing with them since he first got them, also he could summon some help instead of doing everthing himself.

i love the story but it been too many chapters by himself without summoning his characters. I think your is in a good place to add more characters.

why hasen't he summoned his his othe characters like ghost yet?