JustABreeze

Ah, you were referring to the POV change aspect. I do see how it could fit there, though I think it's too repetitive to repeat that much dialogue for a POV change. I also thought it was an editing error due to the sword/spear confusion :)

It's been a while since I've seen this, but I recall thinking the bit before this paragraph comment as an early draft that was mistakenly not removed. Note how similar the two look in dialogue and how this section is cleaner in its prose. I'm unsure how you see the repetition of sections helping the flow.

ngl it's impressive you're keeping up with what's happening, I'd assume with previously made plans? I totally haven't forgotten a whole ton (I have), but I'm still here :P

That one day was sooner than I expected

Probably the latter sadly. One day there'll be more.

Thinking about it, dunno how well republishing on Webnovel as a new story would do. I can't think of any examples either (not that I look out for stories here much). At least you probably got more leeway on options with this novel not using the privilege system, including going elsewhere? Not 100 percent sure though, nor do I know your plans for all that.

Congrats on 250 chapters! Hopefully that draft was only one chapter, losing one would already be a pain, losing multiple would be yikes. Out of curiosity, have you ever considered doing a rewrite of this series? Not that I'm saying that's the answer to your burnout, that could be coming back to this after doing something else you're more interested in, but if you're busy I can't say for sure ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Congrats on reaching half a million views... this hasn't been a very active time for this novel, but it's more significant than third a million ey?

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