I didn't need to reply to you but, here I go. depending on the circumstances. That's all I'll say for now... you can move on to the next chapter or read something else if you find no sense here, thanks.

and become*

Vengeful

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oh Linda , that's my name

lots of spacing is highly needed

This chapter was really engaging .. Catchy and nice spacing

Epic! I thought I was in a Cinema

This paragraph can be broken into two

Same thing , poor synopsis poor writing quality and you'd definitely get nowhere with this

Your synopsis wasn't so catchy. Your first chapter discouraged me. your paragraphs are too long and your writing quality needs improvement . but i feel an amazing plotline can come out of it anyway

Cut your paragraphs into one or two, they are like wall of blocks

The aim is to get more readers not write blindly. but it's a book with a good storyline .. jus work on it

Your writing isn't that good. it needs a lot of work

And I smiled too

Repetition of a word in a sentence doesn't do good to a grammatical structure

Editing is needed though but the work is a nice one... the synopsis and book cover is attractive too and to be honest first chapter was dope [img=recommend]

The synopsis is damn intriguing and i instantly felt the need to download the book plus... the book was slow-paced at the beginning but .. wow! nice work