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Truth be told, there aren't any major changes in the story. The Straw Hats are still sailing the seas as they do in the anime, but there are some differences. Usopp uses guns instead of his usual weapon, and there is a new crewmate besides Bai Ye. Also, most events have been changed slightly in one way or another, and the Chinese character traits are not very prominent. Around chapter 95, there's a very cool fight scene. However, this novel isn't for everyone; maybe you are one of them.
Hmm.... I will think about it.
Generally, I don't like Japanese suffixes attached to names, such as '-chan' or '-kun', and therefore I try to avoid them whenever I can.
Okay, I've made the change, although I don't like it. I considered changing it to 'Bonny' or 'Ben,' but for now, I'll leave it as you suggested.
ok :)
I think "If Bai Ye had not been conscious," would mean that Bai Ye is actually conscious during the scene and it would discuss what would have happened if he were not. However, since we know that he is unconscious, this change would contradict everything.
I made a mistake and confused the man who was in the yellow suit. I didn't expect there to be two of them. I had to correct the last chapters.
OK
Good idea!! I'll do that in future chapters.
I'm not sure which chapter it was mentioned in, but it stated that he obtains ingredients from an internal space. While I wish the author had approached this differently, let's appreciate what we have.
Also, Bai Ye watched anime in his previous world. It was stated in 1 or 2 chapter and later sometimes.
I modified it slightly to make it more obvious that he is just thinking about it.
Bai Ye watched anime in his previous world. It was stated in 1 or 2 chapter and later sometimes. In this paragraph, he is just thinking about it, but I think I may make some changes to make it more obvious.