Drunken_master1964
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Drunken_master19641dCommentedseriously.... stop with the incessant "taoist friend" all the time. Chinese people... some of the dimmest light bulbs in the room.
Seeing Shen Long, the man in red smiled and said, "Taoist Friend Shen, congratulations on advancing to the fifth level of Qi cultivation!"- Drunken_master19641dReplied to Edward_Gee"Alive, I must see you, dead, I must find your bodies. Dad, Mom, I will definitely find you,"
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a pretty alright read. I've unlocked a few chapters with coins and FP, but unfortunately, this novel gets pretty boring at times and I feel that it is a waste of my coins and FP. I wish there were more free chapters since I didn't get a proper feel for the story before I got to the locked chapters. so I'll take a break from this novel, at least for now. I wish the author luck, however.
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evolve*
Creatures involve in the direction of not only the treasure they consume but the energy congregated around the area its evolves in. - Drunken_master19642dCommented
particles*?
Then he got something called Fading Twin daggers. It was a weapon technique that created a fading effect of daggers. It worked by pulling light partials towards one and letting the other fly under the radar. - Drunken_master19642dCommented
veil* not fail
3 the faceless mercenary company: An old resident of Duan city. They are in truth a gun for hire institution, as their main activities revolve around assassinations and guarding of high-profile targets. But the faceless mercenary company is also shrouded in a fail of mystery..... - Drunken_master19642dCommented
perky class? what is that?
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there really is no need to put "this is none other than Leon in every chapter.....
It was a youth with brown hair and eyes. This was none other than Leon, and the lady with white hair was Arian. - Drunken_master19642dCommented
who is Lance?
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this pathetic simp should just die already.
"No, you have to save them please, I understand your feelings towards them are sour, but they are still family." The old man started pleading for Leon to go back and save them. However, Leon could only stare at him with a nonchalant gaze. - Drunken_master19643dCommented
Well the dad is pathetic beyond belief, so I can't blame her. doesn't make her any less of a bi* tch
"Elder Taiyun is such a jester. How could I be in love with that weak man? Look at him laboring around the camp with his frail body. How could he handle someone like me?" - Drunken_master19643dCommentedCh 5 Pitiful Old Man
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you should add "meanwhile at the meeting" at the beginning of this paragraph to help readers understand that the focus just went from MCs step mother and sister to the meeting
"We should go to White Mountain Kingdom, our brothers still have massive influence there. At least we won't be chased by random mages and good for nothing sorcerers" - Drunken_master19643dReplied to ExtractedBullet
not hopeless, but bonelessđ
"No son of mine will be a cripple. You just want us to die here alongside your crippled son!!" - Drunken_master19643dPosted