I really enjoyed reading this, the writing style and descriptions seemed to have improved further along the chapters. First chapter in itself felt a bit rushed, and could've used a lot more description, but after a couple of chapters, I see significant change. There are tense issues tho, Not saying grammar issues are really irritating in here, but you could work on that too. Keep it up!

Really good story, I really like the mc. He is cold, villainous and pretty much a sociopath, brutally deleting stuff left and right. I want to keep on reading, but unfortunately its limited by the paywall.

Came here after reading the manhwa, to be fair, liked the manhwa more. I'm sure this is an unpopular opinion but well, yeah. Just saying. The manhwa art and the pacing in the manhwa was nice. Nothing to take away from the novel though. I still enjoyed it. Kinda sad it's locked behind paywall.