HarveyBakes
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Hello, author here. I'm new to book writing, and this is my first novel. This contains information about a world far away from ours, maybe somewhat in another universe, don't you think? Make sure to read it and assimilate its contents, and I guarantee to take you to a new world that you will want to know about, that's all. I hope you enjoy it, and if you have any recommendations, please share them on my Facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/jovita.proctor.22. Harvey Bakes
As I read the story it seems Interesting shadows,magic, etc. but somehow I notice something my advise is that don't put too much narration on the story add some conversations too make it look intense , overall the story was good the plot, and can you add something on the future that makes him revive some undead and make him its shadow allies just asking but oveall it's fine.-HarveyBakes
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