That’s why ravel is best girl

Funny it’s coming from someone who is proud to be a devil I have a question for you rias if someone gives you the opportunity to run away from the devil society but in exchange you stop being a devil would you take it For example if someone offered you to change you into pure human or pure fairy would you still take the offer

Ok i got a question why is it whether it’s fan author or original author can write great stories but come up with dumb name for the characters while me who isn’t great at writing is able to make good name There’s rei raven haruka karasuba Just how did you come with that name izumiya it is cringe not ok

I am not satisfied unless it’s public humiliation

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You know what is the problem with story like this that has mc support the Youkai faction Simply they made the same mistake as the other of dxd Tge lack of Youkai character that supports the mc There’s only few named Youkai who isn’t even close to satan other than yasaka and even yasaka need the leyline And it’s not enough for us to say that they are group after all for us to call them group they should be more than 10 or 20 Bring more youkai characters and before anyone can argue about oc youkai we have named youkai from other anime like Genshin impact honkai star rail Rosario + Vampire one piece zoan devil fruit user

After all you saw how serafall react to tge truth of kuroka ophis Even when the other species are discriminated and misstreated against the current satan always simping towards tge great king faction That’s why the peace treaty is fake they will always choose their pure kind over others species even if the devil is mistaken There’s no justice in the system of the devil whether it’s new or old

Personally I wouldn’t make riser marry any of the devil heiress that is related to the 4 satan mainly because all the current are biased towards their clan and great king faction Case and point with the way how they didn’t care about the way zerkam unjustly killed cleria bellial the champion sister imagine if their sisters find about the darkness of rating game

Yup

Also don’t forget that riser know about what kind of person ajuka brother is And he tried to get to ravel which riser is protective of

I prefer if riser from the beginning learned haki

Hope mc will stop her

Oh he took waver relic for iskander

I love this story don’t get me wrong i want it to continue for infinity like fgo but I forgot about how this grail war is boring Only redeeming characters of this grail war are jeanne sieg and karna who they made it more interesting

Author while i love your story i dislike that the pairing is only morgan i would have loved if the oc marry both arturia and morgan even though he’s the son of the white dragon

Maybe for you but for me i want this to happen

Well to each their own but I want this to happen after all it’s fanfic for a reason

It’s taking to long hopefully we finish this grail war i want the mc to return to reach grand order and meet with his Arturia scathach his morgan Also since honkai released them later i understand but i would have loved for acheron and black swan to be his two wife and queen Acheron could have been born as kijin like tomoe gozen While black swan could be merlin daughter

Yoo author i love this story it inspired me and I will be copying some ok most of the it

Can you make ryan the new user of true longinus