Daoist4U0EoL

it's a decent read but the story is riddle with mistakes all over the place that it kind of takes me out of it

isn't pakura older than sasori?

hands down my favorite fic at the moment just can't get enough

are there chapters missing I'm confused

really loving the series especially the residents evil part should consider making a fully fleshed out re fic in the future when all your series are completed

if your thinking of weapons you should do something like yang from rwby or bete from danmachi to complement the electro/martial artist style you have going or make him a jack of all trades character involving his inventory think Jackie Chan when he uses his environment and objects around him during fighting scenes

I'm enjoying the read so far but 1 thing I noticed is that some of the action sequence seem repeated especially Ada parts

just wondering if he is ever gonna do anything with the cp he gets from daily/quest rewards or is it just a throwaway

think you might have skipped a chapter or 2

why does Danzo motives come off like he's a standard villager with a lot of power who is ignorant to the world he's a student of the second who has been through 3 great wars Im sure he knows what a jinchuriki is and I'm quite sure he would never openly threaten 1 of the 4 noble clans he would do things behind the scenes to affect the clan/ send a warning