Thanks for the chapter. It’s a Nice story so far, but locking them down to a village so soon, wouldn’t that hamper her ability to level up & explore? Specially if she decides to become the chief?

Story at times is ok, other times the author makes it so the MC suddenly is stupid to make plot points for a future connection, thou it could have been done better & still left MC with some marbles. As for the novel poster, this is completely MTL posting. So as usually LOTS of errors. Worst is the fact the poster didn’t even take some time to correct issues where words are cut to pieces from one line to another line. Making text to speech broken.

Thanks for the chapter!

I have plenty of patience when it comes to a story I like. Since I know that some writers this is a hobby or they have other worldly commitments that can effect the release of chapters as they also wish not to rush their work. I have a few other stories I follow where they are only releasing once a month, some might have a sudden inspiration & put out chapters weekly, only to take a couple months break to envision the path ahead for the characters. I've even had a couple stop for a year & then start releasing, as they built up their chapters. So it's in my library to always let me know when a new chapter is released.

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Bah!! Dude has over 100 women , not that he needs more, so these others should move on & Ely should not get involved, he obviously doesn’t have time for them or his others if he keeps adding more. He better not make any moves on Ely. She has her family, that’s all she needs.

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I would maybe try to keep them together. Right now she already is separated from the first 2 members taken from her & this way she still has some company. But on the other hand, if they split & she comes across another worthy person to join the family to expand and maybe bring in another aspect or direction if needed for adjustment of the story as you invision. Either way can be done, it’s more of how you feel the story is progressing to your vision.

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Review at 32 chapters in. So far it's been a very enjoyable & interesting story to read as we follow the MC after awakening & having memories of past lives make her worried she will lose who she was to them. Not to mention learning to get stronger to protect the ones close to her. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Me "I'm not crying, your crying!"

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How can she not believe it? After all, she was a a bad person in the book, even thou something’s have changed, there is too much against her & not enough to give an easy pass.

Aria "Well, Technically as my future wife, you will be taking care of me constantly everyday, basically you will still be my maid! Because as my mom told you before, I'm lazy!"

well, then how did you know i was thinking about you just now? lol