Dumbass reviewer

Its the bodies that are affected actually don't know why you choose a character but forego its weakness its abit 🤷

He had no business being there

I don't get why they must meet like that it feels so fake, i mean the dude could continue his training and meet in a tournament or something does he have to collect the dragon balls right away, I mean he would basically be taking it from bulma and its still on earth and he got a scanner. All am saying is you forced the meeting abit

Maannnn i think you left a very good story line for something too cliche i thought it would be someguy with similar powers to spiderman it was sooooooooo good and you ruined it, disappointment 🤦

First of that's saying you're incompetent, don't start with an idea without a body🤦‍♂️even then how is this shit associated with DC i don't get it

Yiu guys forget diana is some centuries old she is not that naive

But how did raava died🤔

I thought you'd shove it to korra,,,, maybe amon releases him as he survives due to his large life force 🤗 but its nice

Really shameless 😑

But it doesn't serve a purpose if he is going to depend on things like serum the whole 'nothing' was just to show he was unique and then he goes into the army

First of all at the start of the novel it was something different something amazing, it was cool , the iq the transmigration even the whole choosing 'nothing' but unfortunately that's about it and the nxt thing is just a diagrace for someone compared to isaac Newton this guy looks stupid, first of all the whole point about not getting any help seems stupid if he just chooses to join the army and seriously in the army its like he has the protagonist hallo or something you can't last that long in a war you fight almost two years without scars and he is supposed to have a high iq that's stupid why become a soldier then if you know the future and by the way the way he noticed steve's file was absolute bullshit what the fuck is that guy doing there and then if he is such a perfect soldier then why was he not chosen and the whole war arc thing does not have any significance except showing us how the guy is such a perfect soldier atleast that's how i see it, when he starts studying about the serum it doesn't look so genuine i mean the basement seriously dude, the guy wants to do research and he is still poor as f**k and when he comes out of the life cradle the guy is ripped 🤔 i don't know if you've watched the movies but the difference in steve was because he didn't go through the army training, our dear mc is a war veteran anyway you started writing giving promises that you didn't deliver and you war arc is actually not the best i read your note somewhere along the novel honestly if the guy didn't join the army and relied purely on his iq it would have been great i mean what's the whole point of the backstory i don't even know how he died i thought he was going to continue his research about 4th dimensional view . Sorry about talking too much but really i couldn't stand it after the mc used the whole thing of grenade throwing .... I tried to write on the comment section and then i just got angry😂

Redo hi stuff iko na potential shida ni unafuata tu sana io plot heck ata siku moja ijaisha unakimbilia naruto inakaa mse ana life, ata kusema ukweli vile walimpokea ilikua too much,,, grow some balls usiogope kustray kwa plot[img=Good night][img=Sigh]

[img=update]among the best fanfic i ever read. Keep it up👌

Please author can you just not make the guy suffer too much, too much inconsistencies stopped me from reading this wonderful book but i can't stand how you make the Mc's progress all the time to amount to nothing, we don't like miracle fights that you explain later to be the guy being lucky, i am so annoyed by the fact that you've undermined the space element talk about time

Please continue first time the son of heaven is the MC