Just a person who is bored of my mundane life.
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I can't continue writing on this account. let's see eachother the next year, when I am fully prepared.
I have recently read some webnovels and noticed that they have kept each para short. should I also do that.
I see. A story like stuff. Please let me know how I can improve it.
I thank your for your compliments. As to why it feels robotic is because the Lunell has lived his life on Earth without meaning and purpose. Lunell wished to feel all sorts of emotions, from love and hope to fear and despair.I chose the early chapters to be like it is for Lunell has yet to learn of emotions.Keep reading as Lunell finds out about emotions in the chaotic world of the Realms of Dao.
This is my first time writing a webnovel. I hope to learn more and improve everyday. I wish for you all to tell me my mistakes and if possible how to improve them. Thank You for checking it out.