Its amazing start...The series is going epic till now..this is made by indian Is such a thinkable thing...The start is great i loved the alistair character the character name selection is good and matching...waiting for the battle and the journey of the Main Hero...Waiting for more chapters...

Good this chapter was hooking.. Loved it i need another chapter soon plz.... i have added to the library..

The climax and the Suspense is engaging I loved to see that....I would need further chapters .. I started to love your Story. Transitioning to Earth and the city of Sylvaria, you excel in creating a vivid and relatable backdrop. The introduction of characters like Emi, Hiroshi, and their involvement in the sports event adds a charming and engaging layer to the story. I totally Lost in your Story the plot is amazing the new found powers adds a super suspsnese layer and god has given him the power this is soo much fun..Love to see more plz waiting..