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MCU_Obsess0R

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I'm a young author. most of my writing is just to help visualize my shifting DR easier. If anyone has any suggestions i would absolutely LOVE that because im CONSTANTLY getting writers block <3333

2023-10-05 JoinedUnited States
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  • MCU_Obsess0R
    MCU_Obsess0R2 years ago
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    please comment how u feel about the pacing of the story, i dont think i can continue this unless i get some genuine feedback, thanks <3

  • MCU_Obsess0R
    MCU_Obsess0R2 years ago
    Posted

    i like most of it. esspesially the sophie stories- just why tf is there a dog and horse chapter-?? (typed with long ass nails so sorry the spelling is weird)

  • MCU_Obsess0R
    MCU_Obsess0R3 years ago
    Posted

    Hey! i really like this story, i just want to offer some constructive criticism! One thing is that I noticed quite a few run on sentences and spelling mistakes! Other than that I think the story is good! I would love to see more of it<3 Also- this may be a little self promotion but i have a fanifc about the MCU that I've been working on for a while! i finally released 2 chapters and I absolutely LOVE any feedback <3

  • MCU_Obsess0R
    MCU_Obsess0R3 years ago
    Posted

    yes i just rated my own story >:3