Jordayn_Johnson

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You sound like you trying to make Julian into a Pablo Escobar but I understand. I have to say though this is very different approach than Hardy in Tyrant Billionaire but it should be good nonetheless. Looking forward to it.

why'd you have to push Graff out man. He the one who been there from the start. That's messed up

Alright let's see. You are a good author so I have great expectations

Good chapter 👏 , however shouldn't you have expanded on how the Guar Fellowship members became such cold blooded murderers. As they are still kids and kids jus don't kill without remorse like that even if they might be living hard lives they are still kids i don't know of kids being so heartless. Also when is Woods gonna die the suspense is killing me. PS : stop changing the cover I like this one

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

More chapters please and please make sure the plot develops as good as the Tyrant Billionaire

it wasn't a let down man. It was good, the story is well written and that part actually set some major characters like the con man Victor.

read over this novel three times and it still feels like a whole new story

this book needs more character development. it's too fast past with little plot development. the plot is too standard as well