A very Interest Building Chapter With a Cliffhanger At last...I loved this chapter with more story development is good and also good paced story not too slow not to fast...I loved and Connecting Characters....loved it...I will be hoping More Interesting twist and Turns with egaging story....❤best of luck..

It was Good reading your Novel...I am curious to know what will happen later in the story Your First Few chapters are Great. I have seen this in a few novels the hooking start but this is also a great wonderful hooking start...Your details for each scene are also wonderful i can feel the story well... That's awesome... hope for the best in the future...Keep it up...

Story is pretty interesting..i have Read whole story till date...it is prety good and starting is also suspenseful and wngaging..i loved that ❤...Hope so i will find a Great Action In Future with Mind blowing Story and more unqiue..😊😊

You Have Made it interesting and suspensfull.. I loved that maybe this Story Grows more... Best of luck till here I have read it is interesting... Emi Clothes Description is Fun and Interesting..loved this... Further seeing story progresses more and find What is the Role of Magician in this Story...Keep Writing

The story Till now is amazing.I want to see Kage and Hiroshi in action...I would love him to see in action...I love the way you have introduced the world and all... The climax and the Suspense is engaging I loved to see that....I would need further chapters .. I started to love your Story.. it has potential to gain more readership...Keep it up..