Dear u r amazing.....literally yrr you wrote very well....especially the chees line which depicts love....literally i enjoyed both of the chapters dear....keep it up yrr 👏👏👏❤️❤️....keep writing like this !! MY DIAMOND 💎✨✨

Okk.....so it is a very lovely story...literally i didn't thought that i would enjoy the story that much....ki m apne bhai ki bkwas ko bhi ignore kr ra tha inti der s.....i don't think there is any flaw till now.....i'll read it one more time to find any......just keep going like this and i'm sure you will achieve great heights my precious 🥰🥰.....KEEP IT UP DEAR !!