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thanks author for the chapter

i missed this thx author for blessing me even though I'm 3 days late(CUZ Webnovel sucks)

author did an amazing Job building out the world and its characters my only issue is that their aren't more chapters 😭 if your looking for something to read this is the book

Good chapter my only main issue so far is that The story focuses to much on events That we already know especially The Mars trip I believe it would've worked better if mark went alone like in canon because Kai's involvement didn't really change anything Author your also kinda dragging the plot with Kia and Kiana , that entire plot feels dragged, this chapter kinda felt like filler , Personally iIread through it hoping the needle Got pushed further with Kiana other then that Great story so far

merged because he got Narutos memories so I assume our MC and Naruto are One person now

usually when a character is transmigrated into anothers body they become this weird fusion of both characters so I would say him acting like a kid is kinda in character although I can see where your coming from

I mean Stains is a pretty good example of what can be achieved yes stain has a quirk but that quirk doesn't effect speed or strength yet He was able to Keep up with and manhandle 10% deku , ilda and another hero I'm gonna be real with you Stains A low end of what can be achieved especially when you remember he doesn't have formal Martial Arts training

the character was clearly awkward in the scene and idk what to tell u he has Super powers not talk no jutsu

please tell me all complaints and i will try my best to fix or improve them and also comment suggestions or things u think would be cool to see and I might add them