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"Can you also provide a review for my novel? The title is 'I Just Want the Best for You.'"
"The story isn't heavy, and within just a few chapters, I already felt its excitement. Perhaps the only downside is that in some situations or other issues, you lack detailed explanations. But overall, the whole story is good, and the quality of your writing is also good."
The longer it goes, this story becomes very interesting, especially in the part about different people's perspectives and opinions. It's great, the quality of the writing has also improved, although there are still some shortcomings. But so far, I really like it đââ
Well, the taste is quite strange at the beginning, but in each subsequent episode, it vividly depicts a great journey. I hope this novel remains consistent and continues to develop the story to become even better.