Great book! It's really good and intresting.

Well there isn't much but there will be more with Sasuke and the Oc.

Plot

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I can't find the parts 😭

True

I need her to hate Danzo. I need her to want him dead...

I mean Shikamaru did call her a "dumb prodigy" I honestly just needed someone she cared about to die and that's all my kid brain could come up with. 😅 If you have anymore comments please let me know.

I don't understand the last part.

what's repeated?

I already said I thought it didn't make any sens. I'll probably edit it. Please try and endure my terrible writing

Thanks I will.

Ok thanks! Tell me what you think of the next 5 chapters.

Ok I'll read it.

I'll try. How can I?

Not really sure why I decided to do it like that 😅

the 1st problem while soon be explained. For the second is just an excuse she uses. And for the third she's a prodigy she reads books and ask's people like Kakashi- sensei for help.

Yeah that might be a better option.

It has to be in Naruto.

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