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    11 CHAPTER REVIEW!! Despite the few chapters of this newly started novel, the author really shines when it comes to worldbuilding and sentence structure. The dialogues are well planned and flow smoothly along the progression of the story. Due to the shortness, character design and story development has not had the time and space to really be nurtured and fully done. Despite that, it is easy to follow along the thoughts and actions of the characters. As the author mentions after the first chapter, the upload schedule is inconsistent, and that puts it down quite a lot. It is understandable as schools should always be top priority. I still recommend reading this despite the shortness, it is well planned and very good.

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    A Tale of Prophecies and Wonders
    Fantasy · asimplewanderer
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