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Xana_Shadow6mthPostedThe story in itself is great but halfway through (like, chapter 120 or 130) the author completely changes the way he's writing and seems to have completely changed their direction of where the story is headed. I do recommend this story, but I personally am gonna stop reading because of personal preference. I was already skeptical because of some unnecessary changes to the Canon (and some ridiculous aspects about the MC), but the sudden shift is what made me stop. Great story and thank the author for writing it, it's just not for me.
- Xana_Shadow6mthCommented
Oh my god. Not this again. Another pile of unreasonable hate because of the Author's bias.
This twisted and perverted old man just so happens to be one of the people I hate the most within the marvel universe. I'm almost tempted to just throw him out now but decide against it temporarily as the rest of his team would be a fun addition to the cafe, well most of them anyway. - Xana_Shadow6mthCommented
feels like this is borderline tyranny. she's basically telling him to do what he wants regardless of his citizens.
"So? F* 'em. If they are so unhappy then they can p* off to other places. Let's see how much they enjoy their life in a village that isn't protected by the world's strongest military force. If they prefer getting robbed and killed by missing-nin more than a slight inconvenience in their freedom that they can go ahead in my opinion. You can promote the Will of Fire all you want, but if it wasn't for me, Naruto would have very likely hated this village with all his being. Because a bunch of civilians were throwing a tantrum, you almost pointed Konoha's strongest asset at itself. You can't make everyone happy. As a leader, you need to be able to make the necessary sacrifices to protect as many as you possibly can. You are not the hero of a fairytale, you are the Hokage of Konoha. Act like it." - Xana_Shadow6mthCommented
yes, you are. As I said, there is nothing stopping the women in One Piece from becoming strong. We actually haven't seen a woman that actually worked on being strong. Nami, for example, is a navigator and thief, she had no reason to train like Kuina did. we never actually saw a woman that tried and failed to become strong, and you're claiming that they would automatically do fail because of their physics.
Ch 26 Chapter – 26 A Cruel Pinkie Promise - Xana_Shadow6mthCommented
He just said he wouldn't laugh at someone's dream...
This time Ragna couldn't contain his laugh, "Hahaha! Queen Otohime, I hear you've been to Mary Geoise. Did you come across any fishman or merfolk slave while you were there? Do you think they will release them? Or for example, what would you do if one day your daughter wanted to be taken as a slave by a Celestial Dragon? Will you oppose them?" - Xana_Shadow6mthCommented
this joke stopped being funny years ago.
Also, please don't get him wrong. Ragna just found her cute. Please don't call the FBI. - Xana_Shadow6mthReplied to B_Pierce
that's a problem in this fan fic, then. Canon Hiruzen was confirmed to personally give Naruto an allowance. I know this is a fan fic and all, but it feels like this was avoided JUST to paint Hiruzen in a bad light.
"Since it seems so obvious to you, please tell me: Why should I trust him? Please don't start spouting some nonsense about the previous wars or how he protects Konoha as its Hokage. Why should I, Yuna Uzumaki, as a person, put even the smallest amount of trust into Hiruzen Sarutobi, considering what has happened so far?" - Xana_Shadow6mthCommented
it's actually more than enough until you reach New World.
Ryuma shook his head, "Nope, it's not enough… the sea is full of dangers…" - Xana_Shadow7mthCommented
because he kept you safe from the villagers, safe from Danzo and his ideals at using you as a weapon, had guards monitor you to keep you safe, and personally gave you an allowance every chance he gets?
"Since it seems so obvious to you, please tell me: Why should I trust him? Please don't start spouting some nonsense about the previous wars or how he protects Konoha as its Hokage. Why should I, Yuna Uzumaki, as a person, put even the smallest amount of trust into Hiruzen Sarutobi, considering what has happened so far?" - Xana_Shadow7mthCommented
no, it's because this only happened in this Fan Fic. Canon-wise, the story was not this tragic.
'The village is like a family, huh? Is that why they kicked 2 three-year-old children out of the orphanage? What a joke.' - Xana_Shadow7mthCommented
oh my god WHY?! you drag this on like crazy and do this!?
In the end, after another pointless quibbling, the Sword was not destroyed.detailPeacefully Retiring in this Wonderful World (Konosuba - FGO)Anime & Comics · TheEternalWanderer - Xana_Shadow7mthCommented
this reminds me of something in the old Hunter X Hunter anime.
"Ok Naruto. This is what you have to do: I want you to cloak one of your fingers with your chakra and then dip it into the water. Your goal is to protect your finger from getting wet while generating as few ripples as possible." - Xana_Shadow7mthCommented
almost dropped the story because of this one paragraph.
"Hey," the blond didn't speak to anyone other than the writer of this. "Listen, I know very well that this job is not normal and all that, but why do I have to go to where Foxy is?" The blonde couldn't help but want to enter Foxy's lair. Something was drawing him there. "Wait, hey, seriously, I don't want to go in there. That bitch is going to kill me." He didn't want to go in, but something in his body told him that he should go because maybe he'll discover something important. "Come on man, seriously, I don't want to..." Decided then, he was going to go inside. There were no children present at this time. That was weird. But considering that he can go in and do whatever he wants, he wouldn't mind throwing the kids out so he could check if Foxy was working or not. In any case, he entered with enormous courage even though not long ago, just over a day ago, she wanted to kill him. "I hate you..." - Xana_Shadow7mthCommented
it's literally your job to sleep for favors...
He wanted women who loved him, so why would he mistreat them and sleep behind their backs while they remained faithful to him? - Xana_Shadow7mthCommented
Why would he blame her? That's the whole point of keeping his identity a secret. Heck, Batman used this.
'Your target is right in front of you! And you just spilled your plan in front of him!' - Xana_Shadow7mthCommented
That's a respectable thought
All the 'betterment of humanity'- thing might be cliché but I rather enjoy the thought of it. - Xana_Shadow7mthCommented
according to Kubo, Nel has the largest bust in the franchise.
On the outskirts of a village alive with the chatter, a centaur-like Hollow stood guard. Her head swiveled to the north, her grip on her lance involuntarily tightening. The ancient Reiatsu sent shivers cascading down her spine. - Xana_Shadow7mthReplied to GloriousMilfHunter
First of all, great story so far. kudos. second, I was talking about actual abilities. People in general do outstanding things if its for the sake of someone they care for. Really, look it up. You'd find some really surprising achievements people made for others.
He quoted Yoruichi's words, which were yet to be said in this timeline. The will to protect and power of friendship existed even in the world of Bleach — Mila Rose was a living testament to the legendary power of friendship.