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that's not a crossbow that is a balista.
what a terrible business model. only one per customer how do they survive.
why doesn't he upgrade the buildings he already has.
this chapter has completely derailed our protagonists character making him. seam stupid and foolish. hes just letting his parents in after all that they only care about him now that he has powers and just accepting them back is a sign of true weakness and stupidity on his part and is the exact type of Mc that I hate. this is a big miss step on the authors part and I dont think I will be continuing on because even if the story picks up it will still be tainted by the weakness, stupidity, and foolish of this very moment I hope the author rewrites this because this story does have potential.
because they were horrible to you and only care about you now that you have powers.
liar
would Raze even know what a nation salute is?
it's so weird that a royal family has a peasants last name.
Miller that's a peasants name. it denotes occupation it means he is a literal miller.
that's it. for a city that's five hundred miles in size it only has half a million people that's a really small population density that's a city with a land mass the size of great brittan for context you might want to adjust these numbers mr. author.
doest he have levels why don't he get some levels too so he is not so defenceless
it's on the ground they are on top a skyscraper just make a giant metal javelin lunch it at the spider and zap the javelin with lightning it's that simple
just get it healed man then you can crush them. why is he being dumb?
clever girl.
dang he has that cultivator mentality.
Nicolas of Myra deeds reach even this world wow.
umm no raze dame isn't even at the peak of the innital realms and you want to kill someone in the hight of the middle realms not gonna happen
that's a dumb move just say you will keep the best stuff for yourself and the crinsom crane
a martial arts family has a visitor center what is it a museum.